Ooh, I really like your style! I love how you drew her eyes... And face in general~
I like the character's design too; I'm a sucker for short-haired chicks with wild dress codes like this.
I also like how you color and shade... It's soft, but has a lot of definition to it. The subtle lighting on the shading is really nice to look at.
And also I frigging love the red streak of light coming from the swipe of that pen. It's eye candy. <3
Awesome work! ^^